hairography

hello there i am Andrew's hair. Do i like being someones hair no not really. I mean all i do is sit on someones head all day and then i get shoved in to a hat. So no i don't really like to be his hair. But, it is not that bad being his hair im very soft and he washes me every day. but, he doesn't try to show me off much. I mean why wouldn't he want to show off his hairs beauty?Andrew should take care of me more because I like to be pretty. I feel like he just doesn't care what i think.

Your paragraph is very good and well thought out. i would try not to use is and use better vocabulary. You need more similes and metaphors.